This app is a total ripoff! I read one book on here and it ended costing me more than a hardcover at retail price! The top ups just kept coming without having any idea how many chapters were left. I read Luna Lola The Moon Wolf. The story concept itself was pretty decent, and it moved at a decent pace. However, the writing was absolutely atrocious! Ever heard of editing? If I had a printed copy, every single page would be covered in red ink. It was full of spelling and grammatical errors, poorly constructed sentences with words in completely the wrong order, and often incorrect words altogether. Further, the language choice was often base with over-the-top obscenities that did not suit the character or situation, just carelessly thrown in for impact it did not achieve. Also, I found many of the characters to be weak and whiney, blubbering or falling ill all the time. Finally, the sexual encounters were trashy and cliche, like they copied scenes from pathetic porn films. That annoyed me the most because it did not fit the answers I gave in the profile questionnaire I completed when I downloaded the app. Obviously, I was naive about the content of apps such as this. I was certainly not looking for the XXX version of Twilight! All of these negative aspects overshadowed story itself which did have potential, but failed miserably in too many ways to give it more than a single star.
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