YesNo 9+

Pretty good

I think it was decent

Developer Response ,

Thanks very much!

It’s aight

I understand your a beginning app developer so congratulations, although Ik nothing about that lol. I will say I think if the story was first person with “I” instead of “you” it would be more immersive. I love the concept but it could have used more vivid imagery for example “manic spread across my face as I watched the decomposing corpse approach me in desperation, leaving blood dripping in its wake. It’s putrid smell invading my nose as it closed the distance between us. I stood. Frozen, yet my mind and heart were already running from the predicament ” but I’m not a critic or anything I’m just bored rn lol

Developer Response ,

Hey Anton, thanks for your review! You’ve got really great writing skills! Would you be interested in helping me improve the story? If so please email me at yesnoapp2@gmail.com. Thanks!

Super Cool

Very impressive for a beginning app designer!! (As a dev myself, you should check out SpriteKit. It's much easier than it sounds. Simple tutorial and you're a pro! You can check out my games for examples: look up Alex Nijmeh for a list of my games. I'm 14 btw!)