I don’t want to come across as mean or rude, but what is interpreted as negative feedback is often read in a tone that is exactly that, so please know that this is not my intention and I am providing honest feedback in the hopes that you take it to heart and better your product so that you are as successful as possible. 1. The camera being attached to an avatar was a terrible, yet easily correctable mistake. I, the viewer, should have full control of where I’m looking. If the virtual camera needs to move, it should be on rails and not jerking all over the place. Basically, don’t move the camera unless it’s absolutely necessary. I can understand that this can be a conundrum for certain scenes, like when she is falling, but this medium requires consideration and sacrifice to attract and keep the widest audience. Better to take that out of your story than to alienate an audience that doesn’t fair well with a camera that goes all over the place. 2. When using AirPods for audio, the audio is terribly delayed. I did not try without. 3. The last scene where you’re in a bar and the main character is a bit seductive in a slinky black dress, all whispering that she never wanted me to let go or whatever… yeah we don’t need that in a “Pixar-style experience”. I know some people enjoy sexualizing cartoons, but again - think about the audience and not wanting to alienate people. 4. I have no idea what this even is. Since you’re developing what is basically a movie that the audience is a participant in, then you should’ve done more of a story trailer that tells me about this character, the world… why we are hanging out with this character and what their motivation is. Instead, I got what feels like a college game design project that you got a good grade on and didn’t want to go to waste after you graduated. It’s a random, nonsensical experience that has no rhyme or reason. You mention Pixar, so maybe go watch some trailers, then redo this whole thing like an immersive movie trailer rather than what it currently is. 5. I also wanted to mention that when I first launched the app, my surroundings dimmed and I got an Apple logo, but not the VP Apple logo. It looked more like you added it as a loading icon or something, but IDK. Anyways, I was unable to force quit or do anything, so I had to restart. Thereafter when I launched the app the audio wouldn’t work and after showing the studio logo it would just go back to the “tap to start” screen over and over until I force quit the app and relaunched. 6. Good on you for taking the time to learn and grow as a creative individual. Keep at it!

The scenery moves vary fast. I thought I was going to puke. The animation is good but I couldn’t appreciate it. I hope the full length fixes this when it is released.

First AVP app that I quit within 30 seconds!! Got motion sickness almost instantly Looked promising though