Writing needs to be concise. Less is more, conversation drag on for two long. Needs some sort of spark in the conversation, which seems passive also conversations were dull. Also romance exposition was kind of cheesy too many lines that sounded cheesy and presentation of the lines were off. You probably need to study some other romance visual novels to see how they present and what they write. Good first attempt. Also needs a save point before the second trial, too much rng for deaths and then you have to start over. And lose like 2 hours of your progress and all the coins and items you’ve spent during that time. CGI and events were ok. Weird asking for email, will probably put off a lot of people if keep asking for email as log in rather have a guest log in available.

This is one of the most interesting and heart wrenching stories I’ve read in a long time! I followed the recommended route (Val, Titus, Soren and then Aram) and oh my!!! It was so gooooood!! I love how all of the routes stand alone but they weave into this bigger picture of the world and of MC. Everything makes so much sense and I want to replay their routes to catch everything now that I know the truth and the background of every LI. Aram’s route especially hits me hard because I can relate to it so much. And trust me, even though his route is a pod one, it’s so worth it! And it’s actually quite amazing that you can get so much story content for the amount paid (RIP console prices 🤣). The bigger bundle of coins was enough to get me through the routes along with the free energy chew and coins from achievements. Pro tip, buy energy chews when they’re on sale in the store and stock up! These carry in-between runs 👍 also I joined the discord server and the community is so nice in sharing tips so definitely recommend that if you want to unlock everything efficiently. The devs even pinned tips so supposedly they’re verified and blessed by them. So it’s easy to sift through the server to find what you need. The game is definitely worth the playthrough!!!

This is the most unique game I’ve played in a while. I’m getting tired of static question and answer choice question otome games - especially the pay for the good answers games, ugh. So this was really fun to play as it’s more gamified with building up my MC from deciding where to go and who to meet on a daily basis! Plus the hot steamy scenes are NOT paywalled - thank you devs!!!! Though warning, you do die in the game quite a bit if you’re not managing your gameplay, but the replayability the devs built in with unlocking achievements and how every run through is different makes it entertaining to read. I keep discovering new scenes and new social media messages on my runs which I’ve died laughing at some npc messages 🤣 I’ve played through three of the four love interest routes and not to spoil things, but the meta the devs built in is SO AWESOME. Everything made sense after Aram’s route - which is the hardest and you do have to grind a bit, but it’s so so so worth it. Now I feel like replaying Titus and Soren’s route to see if I notice anything different knowing the truth! Plus I wanna see more Titus hehehe…

I love love love this game!! Let me start by saying as always with Nochi studio, they deliver such a massive amount of quality content with every single one of their games. I’ve paid far more and received far less from every other Otome interactive stories released from other studios. Please do yourself and your wallet a favor and don’t miss these beautiful stories. I loved every single route the offered but for some reason Titus and Aram resonated with me the most. I did play them in order as it made the story progression and knowledge gain overall make sense. In order by LI - Valentina, Titus, Soren, and then Aram.Gameplay and interaction:So the gameplay is interesting, I’ve never seen it worked quite like this for an Interactive Otome game. I recommend going to the Nochi Studio discord to get additional help for encounters and game play advice as you will need it. (They will provide you with the discord info within the game. It is and can be complex but highly rewarding. No spoilers but know that it’s well written and extremely satisfying to complete. Five stars from me - thank you Nochi! ❤️❤️❤️