Now I’m not a person who reads books often, but the premise of this "book" captured my interest. I read the entire thing over a few hours, and I was so glad that I did. The creative animations with the text were incredible. The puzzles were on point, I really only had minor trouble with one puzzle, but the devs made sure to leave the perfect hints should you get stuck. Each puzzle really made me feel connected with the world, much like The Neverending Story if it’s setting had more bizarre landscapes. Also, the audio was fantastic. The sounds put my imagination to work with the music heightening the experience. Lastly, I couldn’t talk about this game without at least mentioning the story. I won’t go into great detail if you haven’t read it yet, but this story makes you feel like you’re right there in the world with its cast of unique characters and beautifully descriptive settings. Maybe because my name is Michael as well as the main character (I know, what are the odds?), I felt more connected to him, so that may be biased a bit, but he’s a great character regardless. It’s one of the most interactive text-based stories I’ve played on any device, and I highly recommend you pull out $4.99 and play this as soon as possible. This game is so memorable, you’ll be thinking about it long after you’ve seen the credits. If you’re feeling generous, consider giving a tip to the devs. I’d love to see what future projects these guys have in store. Go get the full story, I promise you won’t regret it.

I really liked the book for the first few chapters and I also liked it up to the arcade even when you had to buy it because I still would have bought it if it was 9.99 because the story was so amazing but when I bought the app I thought it would be a collection of stories and adventures but when I finished it was just a loop of someone pointing a camera at a fan and spinning. No credits. No nothing it would be nice to have a selection of multiple stories from the menu and more to read with every update and stop calling the reader (me) the first letter of their name. Is it really that hard?! And please if the creators are really listening to me don’t make a “premium version “ of the game, or any subscriptions that make you pay money over time. That’s just for people who have no sense of money and are spoiled little kids who don’t even like reading but want to show off and whose parents does animal testing for a hammer company, but anyway at least make limited edition stories that you could get if you can finish it in a certain amount of time or for a reward of writing a story and getting it submitted for other people to read in a contest or something else like that but I just want more stories for this amazing app maybe you could even make different categories of stories. That would be great if you could do that for everyone else interested in this app because it’s a great app and I just would like more stories you could even make a new app every new story you make with a different color or setting every time Sincerely: Concerned reader.

I like story games but I Don’t like ones that’s ask you for money to play especially bad ones that are not even good, but this game is beautiful This is the first time I've seen a story game that is actually fun and the developers put their hearts into making it so the readers/players can actually enjoy it and use their imagination but like all story games you must pay to read, like I said before I like story games but I don’t like ones that ask for money to play especially bad ones but this one is different because this is the first story game that actually makes me want to pay to read it, it’s so interesting that you can’t help but want to pay for it,But what I hate more than a bad story game is a Review saying bad things to a good game “i refuse to fall for this money gimmick trap” so what you have to pay to read it, it does not even cost that much it’s not like they are asking you to pay $100 to read I mean they are people to if they made the whole game free then the only thing they would get are the people’s joy it’s like having a job that gives you candy instead of money you should be happy they made a wonderful game like this only $4.99 if you where the one doing it I bet you would have made the price higher (I would have) so to be honest . I Don't See A Problem With It! (Btw I love the way you cleverly lowered the prices 👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽)

This is quite different from anything I’ve seen before and I was pleasantly surprised with the concept to add the reader to the story. I’m giving 5 start to the app because it’s quite remarkable and innovative, but I wouldn’t categorize as a game. A game would prevent you from moving forward if you are incapable to give the right answer. It would prevent you to move forward if the time ran out. Nonetheless, I was so drawn to the story, the interactions and the sounds that I forgot time for a short while. Favorably, My advise is to create challenges to the reader. Maybe create difficulty levels, where the reader can choose how he would play and read the book. I thought the story was interesting, but I believe it would’ve been better if it was a bit more realistic. Maybe a suspense story, resolve a mystery or murder case. The possibilities are endless. Further more,I also have to disagree with the tittle. The game only gives the illusion of control to the reader, because the end it’s already set. It would be nice to have a game where every choice you made had a different consequence to the end of the story... Not every ending would the same and the reader would have a more personalized experience... maybe someday, We’ll get to play such a game. For now, let me just say... this story rocks!!! Worth $5 dollars and some... thanks again. Keep the stories coming!