Hi!I feel your stories are on average very repetitive ! Lack imagination,Are Grammatically incorrect!Pause at the wrong places, for example the reader even if AISays Mr. Then pauses for about 30 seconds then says the name or in the middle of a sentence there are far too many breaks, causing the syntax to be completely wrong!How many times when recounting a story do you have to use in 9 out of ten of your stories do you use a Mr. Or Sometimes Mrs Chen ,or Stirling Enterprises ,or Stirling CEO, Or Sterling Tech.Or Lilly for a name of a girl!Ordinary people can be kind good hearted people,Dealing with even less fortunate people than themselves!In every story you talk about the price of the shoes, the Clothes, the car,visa a vi, people who don’t earn that massive fortune!In reality,There are plenty of exceedingly wealthy people/ entrepreneurs ,WhoLike to live modestly,Don’t disrespect others, quite the opposite!Help others quietly!It is exceedingly annoying to try and listen to a story when , certain parts of the story or the whole essence of the story is constantly repeated as are phrases like a ‘ punch to the gut!A well written story has no need to constantly to repeat sayings, a story plot, one could that they felt that they had been facially slapped , or hurt to the core of one’s being! Or a thousand other ways of expressing emotional pain and injury!!!There is far too much repetition all the way through!!In an attempt to be expressive ,It falls flat and becomes boring!One knows from opening few lines what the story is going to be about!You also tell people in the introduction and don’t leave anything to intrigue!!