Burn(t) 12+

Hey, I didn't think it was all too bad. Could you please rewrite it though. I liked the beginning of it but the other reviews are not lying. This story is not long at all, you die in nearly every ending, and it lacks any skill or item requirements. It's almost like reading a short book with a bad ending. The personalization of a character is supposed to influence the story. It would be better if all the choices weren't either you choose the right one or you're dead. Depending on what you choose should change how the plot unfolds. Thank you for your time and effort in this game. I really do hope you take my advice. There is potential if the story is rewritten. I am a very experienced CoG or HG player, but I would never try to write one. It takes more time and dedication than I can provide. This is not a story I would currently recommend, but it is hardly the worst.

The writing was repetitive and dialogue lacked any real power. After a time the game became tedious to continue as it seemed there were times when the storyline would skip ahead. There was an appalling lack of any skill sets/tools.

The only good quality about the game is that the beginning at least felt somewhat intriguing; however, that sensation quickly de-escalated.

I would advise the author take time to hone his craft before attempting another endeavor as such as this.

I ignored the reviews thinking the writing couldn’t be that bad. I am not even sure this person has ever been outside. The story is leading, punishing you when you do logical, sound decisions they don't want you to make. Somehow I used a bow and arrow to shoot through someones stomach and into a zombies head. The indecisive character decisively forces you to perform different actions because the writer wants you to. Its bad. Stay away.