I felt it was over all an amazing story that even though I feel like there is not many player decisions and there are quite a few grammatical errors, but I over all was quite impressed with the story after my first play through and can't wait for the 2nd part! There might be quite a few spelling and grammatical errors but I don't feel it took that much out of the game or made it unplayable so keep that in mind.

I greatly enjoyed the story. I wish there were more choices in the story...maybe add in a feature where you can go back and change a decision without having to restart the whole story and also show a few pictures of the characters and their powers. Please hurry with the next part....that cliffhanger at the end had me replaying the story multiple times.

Loaded with typos and poor grammar. Story had lots and lots of potential but its start was very slow. Then came the MAJOR leaps in logic and story gaps. Example: I'm playing band I get to my new room and there are 4 people there. They start talking like they know me. Only I as the reader never read about meeting them. They just pop up and I'm scratching my head wondering if I missed a page??? Think Magicians tv show only worse. Thank goodness no one had to pay for this. IF BIG if you are willing to play along and create your own understanding of the story it could be a two star rating.

The story was amazing!💯 but the one thing I didn’t like was all the typos it had I mean don’t get me wrong I still went through with the story and had lightning as my element but I think the story would have been better if you fixed all the typos it had but in the end this one was amazing.