Unnatural 12+

This is an amazing interactive story that I’ve enjoyed from the first play through repeatedly until now. The story is interesting and you always feel like you are taking actions that move the story along. Then you have relationships, acceptance of who you are and various outcomes to situations all culminating with a beyond impactful choice that will lead to a sequel release. Wonderful job! Scarlet for the win!

I’ve played a number of these games. I had high hopes for this one, since I’ve found the paranormal/fantasy-esque story’s have really shined from Hosted. But this one...not so much.

Your decisions don’t have much weight behind them. You often feel like you’re going through a maze, but the game keeps throwing impassable routes your way. So many decisions lead to “and nothing happened”that honestly I thought the game was a satire at first.
The writing and editing are truly game breaking, though. Numerous run-on sentences, grammar (especially comma’s, good lord) are used so poorly that reading a dialogue in your head seems like it’s two auctioneers talking without a pause.
I won’t go too much into the typos and such; it’s just the icing on the cake. How the author, and editor (if there was one), could honestly play through this game and be happy with what they see is beyond me. It’s unprofessional and completely disrespectful to the people that are PAYING them for their product.
The game is all text-based....so how the hell can you get away with so many things wrong with the text??

Absolutely love this story and all the choices having an impact but I’m worried we will never see a sequel release or have another content update it’s a real shame if we indeed never do but for what it is as it stands it’s amazing.